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 title: Concalian Culture
 description: 
 published: true
-date: 2024-04-28T21:46:40.697Z
+date: 2024-04-29T12:16:43.111Z
 tags: game-master, concalia, concalian culture, concalian empire, concalian
 editor: ckeditor
 dateCreated: 2023-01-06T16:53:59.820Z
@@ -19,8 +19,8 @@ dateCreated: 2023-01-06T16:53:59.820Z
   <li>Clerics kill Oracle as start of basically a takeover attempt.</li>
   <li>Others find out they have captured angels that they use to fuel the forges (maybe this was the case all along?)</li>
   <li>Civil war ensues, between those who believe the gods abandoned them (clerics who murdered Oracle), and those who believed they had to purge said blasphemy (using angels as fuel) to redeem the Concalians in the eyes of the gods.</li>
-  <li>Ends with those seeking redemption from the gods freeing the Archangel of Justice, who is the main fuel for the forges. The archangel sacrifices the rest of its essence to annihilate the entire empire, casting a great spell that turns all leaves all their cities in ruin, and denies the Concalians an afterlife by banishing all of them to at eternal existence as ghostly spirits in the Shadowfell.</li>
-  <li>Shar, who has a strong presence in the Shadowfell, approaches the cleric side, and offers them a deal: Serve her forevermore, and she'll restore their forms, and give them a chance to have their empire rise from the ashes again – now in her image.<ul>
+  <li>Ends with those seeking redemption from the gods freeing the Archangel of Justice, who is the main fuel for the forges. The archangel sacrifices the rest of its essence to annihilate the entire empire, casting a great spell left all their cities in ruin. A lot of Concalians died of this, while the rest were banished to the Shadowfell, where they were damned to roam forevermore. The surviving Concalians, banished to the Shadowfell, would not age, but would have their bodies slowly fade over time, eventually turning into different forms of shades (type depending on what they were exposed to in the Shadowfell). This process could be slowed by force of will and how powerful the individual is, but it cannot be stopped entirely. After their bodies have faded compeltely into the form of a shade, their minds will continue to deteriorate until they've lost all former sense of self.</li>
+  <li>Shar, who has a strong presence in the Shadowfell, approaches the cleric side, and offers them a deal: Serve her forevermore, and she'll cure them of their curse, restore their forms, and give them a chance to have their empire rise from the ashes again – now in her image.<ul>
       <li>Those who accepted are who became the Nightsworn Concalians. They serve her with the goal of regaining their forms (they are currently transformed by her into different kinds of Nightshades, with a few important ones having regained their forms), and with the goal of regaining what they lost when the Empire fell.</li>
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